New Hope

This is where i will post my original Novel “New Hope”

Synopsis: Breaking the beat of city life, the Aegers came. To maim, their tune, to sing our slaughter. Instruments of deaths they were but amidst the discord of war, a new hope arose. Children with incredible abilities appeared to become humanity guardians against the menace.

(synopsis got a little better, if someone reading the already published chapters write another synopsis i’ll insert his name in the story as character, you can comment here, just scroll down and comment)

WE GOT AN EDITOR HURRAY!

First Arc: the training.

Chapter 0 Preview (Edited)

Chapter 1 Kidnapping (edited finally)

Chapter 2 New identity(Edited)

Chapter 3 First night

Chapter 4 Training

Chapter 5 Competition

Chapter 6 A7 flag game

Chapter 7 New Boss

Chapter 8 Room Dispute

Chapter 9 Knife Simulation

Chapter 10 Catch the flag Competition

Chapter 11 A7 vs A8

Chapter 12 King of the hill

chapter 13 free day (edited)

Chapter 13.1 free day part 2 (edited)

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19 thoughts on “New Hope

  1. Synopsis Attempt
    Breaking the beat of city life, the Aegers came. To maim, their tune, to sing our slaughter. Instruments of deaths they were but amidst the discord of war, a new hope arose. Blooming amidst tragedy, mutant children were born. These are their stories.

    That last line is from that Special Victims Unit tv show, but since the subject matter is still about suffering I feel it still applies. Later on you can mention that the story will be primarily about one individual, but that is usually settled in the exposition.
    First name Kevin. If you don’t like it, that’s fine. I just wanted to help, so let me know what you think.

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  2. Breaking the beat of city life, the Aegers came. Tuned to maim, they served out slaughter. With their hands, they played the cords of death but through their grasps did man slip. Halting our descent, from war’s ashes we found new hope. It presented itself in the form of guardians. Protecting us from the menaces of evil, were children with incredible powers.Time shall bear witness to their growth and so shall those who hurt us.

    Thought about it again and hope this is better.

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